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Posted by Endang S Priyatna (Curly) | Posted on Thursday, December 25, 2008 | Posted in

One by one, everyone runs away. And here I am, decayed and dying at the corner of this deserted room.

Why should I stay? What keeps me here? Is there a little hope left here? They say,"there's a hope in every despair". "I have doubt in me; fear is consuming me", I reply. "Don't you know fear? fear that also drove you away, forsaking this cursed place" I say. "Why don't you stay too? Don't you say there's a hope in every despair?", I say again.

"because hope is for you, and life is for us" they say.

One by one, everyone runs away with their life. And here I am, decayed and dying at the corner of this deserted room, letting fear consume me.

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Poetry

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Posted by Reza Anggriyashati Adara | Posted on Saturday, December 06, 2008 | Posted in ,

implicitly they say,
if you saw children dying in hunger
"close your eyes"
if you saw injustice in everywhere,
"Close your eyes"

we live in the world of ignorance
stop to be innocence
but pretend that you some care
so you dont have to be shame

believe nothing but wealth
it buys anything even truth
turn black into white
turn liar into noble one

The Truth

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Posted by Creating Class 2005 | Posted on Thursday, December 04, 2008 | Posted in

I saw an evil.
Every time you met me you always said that I wasn’t worthy to have all I got. You always thought that was because of you, all are yours. You’re the best and I was nothing.
“I deserve to get happiness” said I
“No, you’re not”
“But why?”
“Because definitely I’m the first and you’re the second”
“What’s wrong with you?”
“Nothing, I’m just jealous with you”
“Ok, I think this conversation is over”
“Em, no problem”
“Just leave this room!”
One of my servants entered the room “I’m so sorry Mam if I’m disturbing you but there’s someone out there and he wants to meet you soon” said he.
“Yes of course, no problem Amir. Just let the guest come in” I told him.
“O my dear, how are you?” the guest smiled at me.
“Wow you’re surprising me Uncle Ben. I’m really fine thank you and how about you?” I asked.
“I’m fine but just getting older than you met me a couple of years ago, Mrs. Johnson”
“No uncle, you always look young for me” I kissed one of his cheeks.
I and Uncle Ben had dinner together that night but it’s too bad that he couldn’t stay any longer.
“Did you tell about me to Uncle Ben, didn’t you?”
“No, I didn’t and where are you coming from, and why don’t you show up when he came? Hah, are you afraid of…” I said it with a big smile
“I’m must afraid of what?! The only one who must afraid of cheating is only you, My Mrs. Johnson. Or maybe you’re boring with all that you’ve got so you decide to put them back by telling the truth? Em, with my pleasure I’ll help you my lady.”
“You... Why are you always bothering me?! With the way you look which is always same like me, stop imitating me, evil” I really felt angry.
“Hey, my soul mate, why do you become so rude to me? Don’t you remember that we’re twin so that’s why we always look like each other and about imitating Mam, on the contrary because the one here who always imitating is you. ”
Kringgg…kringgg…kringgg. Ah, the phone rang and really felt glad with it.
“Hello” I hung up the ringing phone.
“O hello. Honey, I’m so sorry because I’ll go home late. The CEOs are asking a meeting to discuss about the new product of the company tomorrow early morning and that’s why I must prepare the concept this night since two hours ago. I’m really sorry dear because I can have dinner with you.” Said Mr. Johnson
“It’s fine, I’m understand about it. Em… Uncle Ben visited me about two hours ago and we had dinner together.” I told him about Uncle Ben visiting.
“What a surprise, but it’s too bad because I couldn’t meet him, maybe next time. “
“Yeah, he also said that he will move to this town next month because his project on the last town had already finished. So, we can visit him as often as we want.”
“Honey…there is something else that you want share with me? “
“I guess not.”
“Are you sure? Did Uncle Ben tell something hurt you? ” Mr. Johnson still asked his wife.
“Yes definitely I’m sure for one hundred percent, Boss “I convinced him.
“Did Uncle Ben tell you something em…about Jessica? “
I kept silence for a while “No honey, he didn’t say anything about her. Maybe he doesn’t want to remind that sad story.”
“Ok I’m glad to hear that. I will arrive at home maybe about next an hour. Be a good girl until I’ll get home.” Mr. Johnson finished the conversation.
I knew that I was a fortune woman. I had a very great man as my husband. Even I didn’t have anyone except uncle Ben as my family who take care of me since I was a little girl, I was still happy because Andrean Johnson really loved me without looked my family background and it’s enough for me to forget that I was an orphan.

“Hey... Jessica comes here soon. Look this beautiful view.” I heard my name and soon I came toward the sound.
“Yeah, it’s really amazing how come you find this place?” I asked her.
“Hahaha…it’s because I’m the best. I’m more blessed than you, Jessica. “She said it with laughing. Suddenly I felt that all my jealousy of her was getting more and more.
“Hello, I’m back” the familiar voice disturbed my daydreaming.
“You!” I felt angry.
“I thought that you’re flash back to the last time when we did our journey to the Gede Mountain a few years ago, isn’t it?”
I was not interesting to answer the question. “Just leave me alone, you evil” I screamed.
“Evil?! You said that I’m an evil? You’re the true evil and plus a big liar”
I threw a glass on my hand to her.
Pranggg”Ups… sorry but you miss it.”
“What do you want from me; please…I can’t handle this anymore. Every time you’re always bothering me and my life, I’m begging you to leave me alone.” I cried.
“You know what I want. I want everything from your life. If you give it, I will leave you alone.”
“Including my soul, isn’t it?” I looked at her face sharply.
And you smiled. I knew since the beginning that it would be over if I gave my life to her. I was tired with the situation. I took an envelope knife on the table.
Brakkk… honey what are you doing? Put it back, please” said my beloved husband
I shook my head.
“Seara please, put the knife down.” He still begged
“Seara? I’m not Seara. I’m Jessica. My name is Jessica. Seara was dead, she felt into the stream at Gede Mountain and not Jessica” I whispered
“Come on, do it Jessica. And I promise that it’ll be over for you and for me” said her
“Shut up, I hate you, you made my life so miserable” I cried again
“Hey, with whom you’ve talk to, Seara?” he confused
“I told you before that my name is Jessica and not Seara. Don’t you get it?” said I
“Ok... just be calm with the knife. And Let we talk to solve the problem.” He still begged
“You never love me. You always love Seara and not me.” I told him
“No, I love you always and you know it. Seara I’m sorry I mean Jessica.” He tried to make me calm.
“You never can forget her, don’t you?” I asked him again.
“I love you know and ever.” He answered my question.
“Even I’m Jessica and not Seara?
“Yes, I love you no matter who you are.”
“Liar, he is such a big liar, you know Jessica when I’m falling into the stream I was pregnant his child. It means that I’m his true love and not you. You are only a follower and a cheater. You took all what I had” the sound tried to make me confused.
I was really shocked to hear that and I couldn’t control my hand anymore.

“Jessica please helps me... I still love my life, I don’t want die soon” Seara panicked.
“Ok... I’ll try to get a help for you, just wait” I said.
“No, just give me your hand I’m really scare if you leave me alone.” Seara still panicked.
O God, why was that bad memory coming back at this time? I stabbed my chest.
“O, dear... what are you doing? I love you much. I know that you are Jessica and not Seara. I knew it since long ago, and also your uncle. He is really sorry that he can’t share his love to you as same as Seara. We know the truth and we kept silence because is not matter who ever you are.” He continued his sentences. “Seara got a cancer that’s why she really jealous with you because her time is not longer anymore. And Uncle Ben knew it since she was a little girl, that’s why he always gave his love much to Seara than to you.” He hugged me so tight look like that he wasn’t to share his life on me that time.
“But Seara was pregnant that time” I said it with my weakness.
“Yeah, I also know it but Seara knew that her life only left for five months and that’s why she is so possessive to me. I knew that you’re so afraid of letting Uncle Ben felt sad because of Seara and you chose that the dead body was Jessica and not Seara. But we knew it and ignored it because we love you. If I can turn back the time, I’ll chose you as my love and not Seara.” cried Andrean.
“Please help me… I don’t want to lose you and my life so soon” I whispered. But before I close my eyes I saw the smile, the usual smile from Seara. A victory smile, no… it’s an evil smile.

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A Little Girl and Me

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Posted by Creating Class 2005 | Posted on Thursday, December 04, 2008 | Posted in

The wind blew softly, the weather cool enough and the smell of the fresh grass created a harmony even in a grave yard. The sound of a crying little girl in a front of a grave brake a quietness on that place. She cried slowly but every creatures on that place which was used to with the loneliness definitely was hampered by the sound even just a little.

She was a beautiful orphan girl. She looked pale with a pair of sad grey eyes and brunet hair. Her legs was very dirty because she didn’t wear sandals or shoes, she was barefeet. She spread some wild flowers on that grave with shaking hands which described that she could handle the emotions and what she felt on that time.

A black dove bird flew toward her which looked like it already there to share the little girl pain. She suddenly realized that not only her but also there was other lives which already existed there before her. She shook her head by hoping could find someone else and not only the bird there and she smiled a very charming smile because her hope was granted, she found me.

“Why you always cry little girl ?” I asked her.
“Because I feel so lonely without anyone beside me.”
“But you always cry everyday”
She smiled.

I looked at her eyes deeper “Hey, it doesn’t mean that you can cry like that.”
“Yeah, I know that isn’t good for me.”
“Um…OK” I couldn’t anymore to not caressed her hair “But what can I do for you to make you stop crying, dear ?”
“I will stop crying if I can go out of here, how is that ?” She said that with her innocent face.
“But I came here almost everyday to play with you. I always tells you a different story and gave you a candy when I came everyday.” I touched one of her chubby cheeks.

She showed me all her candies to me “you can take them back if you want to.”
It surprised me “Are you boring with the candies, honey ?”, “why you didn’t tell me since I gave it to you for the first time, six years ago ?” , “how about chocolate, hmm... ?”

She shook her head “No…I don’t anything from you. I know that I’ve already had you beside me and that’s enough but I promise you for not crying like that anymore with one condition that you will let me go, will you ?” There were tears on her face.

“OK !”
“Are you serious ?”
“Yeah, I was falling in love with you since I saw you for the first time; with your eyes twelve years ago and your crying for the first time in your life, Julia. And because we have the same destiny, to complete each other.”
She smiled and hold my face with her two little white hands “So, it’s the time right ?”

“Yup, it’s the time. It’s the right time, dear.” I convinced myself.
She whispered some strange air into my face and suddenly I felt free. We flew together through the sky. I looked down to the grave yard and saw her grave which was written “Julia Anniston, R.I.P on 12 October 2002”. Yeah, the Bali Bombing has token her life six years ago when I took her for vacation but unlucky me because that accident not took my life also but only her. That’s why I couldn’t let her go because I didn’t have anyone else in my life.

“We will be sister forever?” she asked.
“Yeah, we will be sister forever.” I convinced her and myself .

Fear

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Posted by Endang S Priyatna (Curly) | Posted on Wednesday, December 03, 2008 | Posted in

How wonderful the way you run for you life. What a relief for amounting fear consuming your sensibility. When the fear grows stronger, it's a very wise decision to run for your life, before it breaks you into pieces.

As for me, whose life is lifeless; sensibility is senseless, letting the fear consume sensibility seems to be wise indeed. What a foolish wisdom-a fool never gets wise. It's just a faultiness, a fool always believes to be wise.

Talking to Angel

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Posted by Creating Class 2005 | Posted on Tuesday, December 02, 2008 | Posted in

There was an angel.

He was standing under a dying tree in middle of an abandon grassy yard. Afternoon sun gave a perfect glance of him, an unhandsome old man with almost bald gray hair. The wind breezed his dreary dirty shattered wings, a type which you wouldn’t ever see at immaculate Christmas’s postcard image.

But I knew he is an angel. His feet didn’t touch dry and cloaked soil under him. Instead, he could be perfectly portrayed as vague resemblance from Rembrandt’s painting than real flesh and blood substances like me. And I knew he was an angel because my heart said so, and what you could ever believe more? Mind, no way. It would only give you a full non-sense things which intoxicating those so-called materialists.

“Like her.” I murmured unconsciously. I didn’t know why but sometimes I couldn’t control myself.

He gave me his toothless smile as I moved toward him. He talked, with universal language, which didn’t have to be uttered. But you would understand it instantly because your heart, the very trusted part of your soul, said so. Hitherto I decided to pause my indefatigable journey of search of the truth to talk to him.

“I was lost”

“From what?” asked me, with mortal language, which had to be uttered since my mortal nature hindered me from not doing so.

“ A battle”

“What battle?”

“Of her soul.” Then he cried, with tears that you wish you wouldn’t ever see or imagine, in the rest of your sinner days.

I instantly felt some kind guilt, the one that you felt after you yelled at your parents or hurt someone you loved the most. I didn’t know why, but I assumed it was simply because he was an angel, the most sacred being after God himself. I hoped you would nod to my statement if you also believed in them.

I asked him again, “Who’s she and why you cried?” Instead of answering my question, he asked me to walk with him. I, who was charmed by his uncanny irresistible charisma, can’t resist his invitation. He seemed able providing my agitated search of answer of the real truth; one, which made me, couldn’t rest even for a while.

In the middle of our journey, we meet cavemen who wear nothing but scattered animal’s leather in their bodies. They were worshipping a giant stone and chanting words, which I couldn’t interpret. Then the thunder suddenly flashed and shattered a giant tree into two pieces. The thunder shocked them and but after few moments, they turned worshipping the torn giant tree.

I sighed with disgust feeling toward them, “Huh, morons. How dumb they are? Why they worship things that wouldn’t grant anything? Why they are very easily enchanted by any power?”

I thought The Angel would agree, or at least nod to my statement but I was shocked when he said that I was no better than those cave people. I, with my self-centered mortal proud, rejected his opinion, “Absolutely, I was better than them. Unlike those cavemen, I am worshipping monotheist God or also known as your own Boss.”

“But don’t you think they are resembling who you were in your early days?” He revealed solemnly. “They are in restless infant search of God, believing anything or anyone.” I was double stunned, not only because of his words but also some annoying memory of mine.

The sun shone brightly as if it would burn anything under its shine. I, who was captivated by his power asking, “Are you God?” No reply.

Then a cockroach mesmerized me with its disgusting so-called wings.
“Or you” I pointed the big cockroach under kitchen’s table. No reply.
Thus, I realized that I could save myself from the burn sun above me and I could kill the cockroach in few second. So…

“Or me” I pointed myself.

No reply.

Then I decided to worship myself. Ha.

“Before you become very self righteous like those so called fundamentalists, let us continue our walk and you can decide who’s better then.” Said The Angel.
After that we continued our walk until reaching the border of abandons land and city. I immediately warned him, “Don’t go to the city, the place was burned out with the inner hell.”

He only gave me a beatific smile instead of an uttered language. Again, I guessed he wanted me to follow him first.
I chose to follow him first.

We arrived at the Islamic clergy elementary school in the suburban area. The class was already started; students were listening their teacher with full-adored attention. “There is no God besides Allah, and Mohammed is His prophet.” Said teacher. My memory wandered to my own childhood days in clergy school.
“When you did naughty things, you will suddenly enter hell, the place of eternal fire where sinners become its fuel.” Said my teacher. His words rose hair at nape of my neck. Then I asked him back, “What we should do to avoid hell?” He answered with solemn voice, “Don’t do naughty things and prayed to Allah all the time.”

I was praying five times to avoid hell.
I was fasting in Ramadan only for releasing my body from hell.
No reply. But I was still worshiping God.

The angel grinned; I thought he was reading my own self-sin confession. I felt little bit embarrassed. But the Angel said that I was not the only one who felt like that. Hell is not only a horrifying but also captivating word. Most of people, prayed to God in order to avoid Hell alone.

But, was it the only core of worshipping?

Was it wrong?

How about love toward God?

How about you?

Is it God who captivating you to His shrine or his eternal fire where your full of sin body will be its eternal fuel?

I guessed no one could give us exact answer besides the Angel and of course, God himself since He is the source of all knowledge. Then I turned to Angel next me for exact answer. But I was wrong, instead answering my question; he just smiled and said that I was the only one who could answer my own restless question. Human is the most self-denying creature. No matter how perfect the answer it was, human would always seek another one and perceive what they consider as the most fitted one for them and not the truth.

Again, I was tormented by the truth. But, did he really tell the truth? My humanly egotistical feeling forced me to deny it.

Then we continued our journey until we arrived at the gate of university. Again, he shed his tears. I, who was confused by his attitude, asked him the reason behind his tears. He said that university was the place where human starts to reject God by assuming that they are already finding ultimate knowledge of everything.

“Like Her.”

“Was it wrong? Was it human’s mission to find ultimate knowledge of everything?” Asked me.

“No, there was nothing wrong about it but the arrogance was the down side. When human starts to feel they are already being the source of knowledge, they begin to be shame about believing God. They begin to separate faith from everything, as if talking about God is only one level polite than talking about enjoying carnal activity with Parisian Prostitute.” He uttered briefly.

O, don’t remind me about those days. It tortured me a lot.

“Nietzsche said that God is dead.” Said I in the front of lecturers.
No, he is still alive.

“God is only kind of opium which making society in the high stone of frantic waiting toward afterlife.”

But I am waiting for that.

“Therefore we should separate frantic belief of God in our pure minded college”
But I do believe in God like Peter Pan with his belief to fairies.

I do.
I do.

“I do believe in God.” I murmured unconsciously. Again.
“Yes, you do. She did that too.” He answered my unconscious murmur with full attention, “But you chose to pretend as if you didn’t. You knew it was very not intellectual for valedictorian like you to believe in such myth called God.”
Again, he ripped me for the truth and I am tortured as well embarrassed with my inner self. But I preferred to deny it because it was easier than accepting who really I am.

I do.

“Like Her.”

Another stop was Internet café, the new restless shrine of modern human. People starred at the computer’s screen with full attention, some giggling and some expressing their horny face. The Angel was stand still. We talked no more but watching them.

After few seconds, The Angel asked me with sounds like an archaic question, “I couldn’t understand but wonder why so called modern human built it.”

“It is new stage of modern communication, human could cut the distance and communicate easily with other people in every part of earth. Internet makes the world becoming smaller, faster, and more efficient.” I answered with kind of proud toward Internet, the best human’s invention ever.

But he grinned instead of admiring, “Don’t you think Internet is kind of oxymoron. When human say that they build new stage of communication, they also cut the real communication at same time. They are so called virtually talking to people. Frantically believing that they had find so-called friends in empty non-exist world. They are modern human who denying God but looking elsewhere to find substitute. In the end, they find nothing but empty life, like you.”

“Like Her.”

“Don’t you think, God is also kind of modern communication, an oxymoron. When I prayed to God, I felt like talking in private chatting room which giving me nothing but empty reply.” I answered him with full rage, which I didn’t understand where it came from.

He answered my question somberly, “You know you already got the answer from God himself. But you chose to be deaf, blind, and mute as if nothing had happened. Then you asked to God about why He didn’t reply your prayers. But in fact, he did.”

“Are you God?” I asked ‘Das Capital’.

“Or you?” I pointed Adam Smith.

“Or you, are you God?” I frantically asked my own laptop.

“Where’s God?” I shouted out loud to dark cloudy sky upon me.

Then my heart said with very calm voice, almost silent, “He is here, near you, very near with you.” Sorry, but I heard nothing.
No reply.

A hollow in my heart.

Tears busted out from my eyes. A hollow. A hollow. Could you explain this hollow? I turned to Angel furiously, “Why, why I can’t find him in anywhere? Why I have to feel this hollow which causing my restless search of truth.” The Angel sighed, “She also felt like that too. She felt alone, hollow. I was lost from Her soul. No reply.”

“Who’s she? Why you always talked about her? It is about me, not her. ” I asked him infuriately. “It’s about us. She’s me, She’s you. We are unison.” He revealed truth. I frowned, “Who?”

“She’s, our writer.” Said The Angel.

What.

“She writes all these things. You and me. We are merely characters who projecting Her hysterical search of God.” Revealed him.
NONONONONONO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

“But NO, I am alive, I am real human, I can think, I can breathe.” Denied me.

“Yes, but everything that you did, is merely thing which was pre-instructed by Her. You are only a frantic character which resembling Her Humanity confusion about God. You have no free will, so that you can’t be classified as human.” Revealed The Angel, again.

I cried, with my selfish tears, which denied my so-called false existence and indeed, Her existence which giving me nothing but whole restless confusion.

“Why She didn’t ask me, or at least feel pity on me before She created me?” I asked him angrily. The Angel gave me no reply. His silent intensified my anger. The Internet café was suddenly gone like blur water paint and turned into desert of nowhere. The desert wind blew hard to my face and his almost shattered wings. I looked hysterically to my surroundings.

I laughed loudly. She wanted to show Her omnipotent power but again, I would fight Her, you back. “I won’t lose from you.” I shouted Her.

I shouted him afterward, “Didn’t you feel same anger like me because of your ugly physical performances which She self-interestedly created? Why She gave you, the being who has fully faith on her, such a extremely ugly physical outlooks like this?”

Then he suddenly cried, again, his tears tortured me the most. “Why you cried? Did you felt sorry for your physical outlooks?” I asked him calmly. “No, I didn’t cry for that unimportant reason. Why She had to ask us for that? She’s our Creator; She can do anything as She pleases, including creating you and me without asking our pre-permission.” Answered The Angel.

“Including creating your ugly physical performances as She wished.” I inquired him back, only to burst his angelic anger, which turned Pious Lucifer to be King of Satan. He just nodded instead turn back to be furious about Her Injustice.

“I cried because She asked same question to Her own Writer, about why She had to be created with such restless question and to be very tormented by Her own restless search of truth or I rather say the real awakening. I cried because She chose to disbelief every answer that I gave. Like you, She also couldn’t endure the truth.” The Angel reasoned. “But how difficult it is, it is the real truth. I couldn’t give you any answer ‘cause you already chose to deny me.”

I cried.

We cried.

Yes, it was. He already gave me the answer that I looked for so long but I didn’t know why I still felt the burden deep inside in my hollow heart. Why you still put it?

Maybe, maybe, it was better for me, for us, to never know the truth, to be real deaf, blind, and mute. But I couldn’t.

“Imagine if there is no heaven”
John Lennon
Sorry John, but I couldn’t.
Me.
Reza Anggriyashati Adara.

The Shadow

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Posted by Creating Class 2005 | Posted on Friday, November 28, 2008 | Posted in

When I was awake, I did know where I was. I could not recall what happened before I closed my eyes, I tried to remember but could not. It seemed that my mind was blank and there was no memory in my brain.

A woman entered my room by bringing me a breakfast. I did not know her because her face was strange to me. She put the food on the table beside my bed, after that, she went out of my room without saying anything. I got up from my bed and looked around my room.

I saw a girl standing beside the window who looks so pretty with her white skin, long black hair, and beautiful face but her countenance was pale. I noticed her trying to recognize her but I am not really acquainted with her. I approached her and tried to make conversation.

"I am bewildered what happened to me; I do not know why I am here in this room.” I said to open the conversation and expected that she could explain about what happened but there was no response from her, she just smile cynically. I could not understand about her cynical smile but I was sure that there was implicit meaning of it. I still noticed her pale face wondering about her presence in this room. "Do you know why I am here?” I tried to ask her and hoped that she would answer my question to tell me about what happened.

"Listen, everything what happened is because of you! I was trapped here because of you! You are the cause of what happened to you and me!” She answered my question angrily; it made me feel to be more confused. I could not think and recall what I did before I was not awake but there was still blank in my mind.
”I cannot understand what you said, why do you blame me happened? What thing that I committed making you implicated in my problem?” I asked her expecting that she would give me explanation about what she said to me. She looked at me angrily as if she would kill me.

”Follow me!” she asked me to follow her and hold my hand without asking my agreement to follow her or not. She brought me to a grave which its gravestone was carved a name that I think the name was not6 familiar to me, Claudia Smith (1988-2008). "Whose grave is it? Who is Claudia?" I was still confused but I did not want to ask my question to her. I tried to guess what it meant but I could not because I thought I did not know Claudia and my relation with her.

"Do not you remember her when she was alive?" she asked me as though she knew that I had ever known Claudia but I still did not remember anything. Before I found the answer of her questions, she urged me to follow her again to another lace. She brought me to the room again and asked me to notice a woman that brings me a breakfast but I thought she was strange to me.

"Do not you know why she did not say anything when she delivered breakfast to you?" she asked me as if I knew the answer but I was not able to answer it.
"Look at me!" She snapped. "Look at yourself! Do not you find the answer yet?" she urged me to answer all of her questions but I believed myself that I did not know it.

"Why do you do it to me? Why do you urge me to answer it? Why do not you tell me who I am and what happened to me? I cannot understand everything what happened to me? I do not know you! I do not the woman! I do not Claudia! Moreover I do not know myself!" I cannot restrain myself to say what I have on my mind for making her satisfied that I did not know everything what happened. I looked at her angrily and noticed her paler face, her hair was tousled, and her eyes became red. I was flustered to look her changing face. It made me afraid and I bent my head to avoid her cynical gaze.

She laughed uproariously knowing my fear. Then, she cried and laughed again. I could not interpret what she did.

"Do not you remember?” she asked me for reminding me my mistakes, " you have killed your sister, Claudia, for you are jealous of her beauty. You admired yourself but you did not want someone to be prettier that you. Moreover you have cut Ms. Mary's tongue, for she is the member of church chorus. You are the member of the chorus too but she is always chosen to be the best to sing the holy song because of her beautiful voice. You are very ambitious to make your self the number one of the others." She told me that I was an accused.

"Look at me and noticed me!" She snapped. "I AM YOU and YOU ARE ME, WE ARE ONE!" she emphasizes and let me think of what she said to me. I looked at her and noticed her pale face. I touched her face, she was trapped in the mirror, and it was my shadow. I approached her and touched her face; she smiled and whispered something to me. I smiled hearing what she said, I looked on her eyes but I thought it seemed that there was something loose from myself. I still disbelieved that she was me. I tried to make myself believe that she was me. I was crying, she was too, I was laughing, she was too, I was screaming, she was too but I could not understand why she cut her wrist by using razor blade. My wrist was bleeding but I still looked at her. She was smiling, and then she disappeared. I was crazy; I talk to my shadow in the mirror.

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Me in the Boredom Room

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Posted by Creating Class 2005 | Posted on Friday, November 28, 2008 | Posted in

(Silence...)

“Ohm…”

“I remember the last day off. That was I felt in this mourning holiday, cold and blue. I was locked in my own mind, stuck in a room. Couldn’t go anywhere like in prison, asking something without answer.”

“Ohm...”

“All the same…”

“Ohm…”

“It was like this”

(Silence, but wasn’t alone...)

“Ohm…”

“Is it right??”

“Ohm…”

“I love him.”

“Ohm…”

“But I was cheating at his back.”

“Ohm…”

“I love someone else from my past.”

“Ohm…”

“And I’m waiting for him…”

“Ohm…”

“I am bored!!”

“Ohm…”

“A nightmare”

“Ohmmm…”

“TALK TO ME!!!”

“Ohmmmmm…”

“IMBECILE!?”

“OHHMMMM…”

“Forgive me…”

“I want to sit there,”

“Ohm…”

In the corner of boredom room, waiting for someone show the truth. The more shouting, the more it’s like a grave yard.

(On the wall, there were shadows staring. Black. Waving. High.
Through the window; there were tears from the sky going together with sorrow and pain.)

“You know I am so angry with you!”

“Ohm…”

“I felt like I was lost. I was a loser, because I was just watching; watching people forgetting their past and their history. And I was the only one who lived in the memories. I obsessed with every single thing from my past. If I could I would do anything to bring them to present. Therefore, I refused to live here. I just wanted to live… living in the memories, to be eternal.”

“Ohm…”

“What’s the time now?”

“Ohm…”

“It seems already morning, isn’t it?”

It was raining outside but the sky so beautiful not blue but grey.

“Ohm…”

“Dark again”

“Ohm…”

“Damn!”

“Ohm…”

“Why are you just following me??”

“Ohm…”

“Please talk to me! I just want one thing. I want to go back to my past!”

“Ohmmm…”

“OF COURSE, I DO!!”

“OHMMM…”

“I do, I remember date and time; September twenty second, Sunday… twenty five after nine.”

“Ohmm…”

“I want to wait for him. He promised me he can bring me to the past in where I know I can mix my memories and desire. I want him to come. It’s been a years and nothing happen. So please help me, but I won’t get out of here either. It feels like I am about to die.”

“Ohm…”

“Why are you just…! Please talk to me. Where is he?”

“Ohm…”

“I am tired.”

“Ohm…”

“Huh??”

“Ohm…”

“You just don’t care! Stupid!”

“Ohmmm”

“Irresponsible!”

“Ohm…”

“I know someday will come and today will be the PAST. But I don’t like a day TODAY!!!?”

“Ohmm…”

“You are disgusting!”

“Ohm…”

“I am tired waiting.”

(In the boredom room, on its wall, there were shadows, laughing, waving, black, and whispering.)

“Just get over it!”

“Why don’t you just leave?!”

“NO!”

“Just leave and let me here alone!”

“NO, we have to be always together.”

“For what? We are just shadows and nothing will be changed”

“You are so pessimistic.”

“I am realistic”

“You are tired”

“Yes I am, just go!”

“No, I’ll wait for you.”

“There is no use to wait!”

“Excuse me??!”

“I said there’s no use to WAIT! Just go away and reach your future in front of you. With me you’re just being only a shadow.”

In the boredom room, on its wall, there were just shadows. Gloomy. Still raining outside. It became cooler, will be more shivering.

“Not anymore please!”

“Ohm…”

“Dream”

“Ohm…”

“Nightmare…”

“Ohm…”

“What else?”

“Ohm…”

“Ohmmmm…”

“Ohmmmm…”

“Ohmmmm…”

“Ohm…”

“Ohhhhmmmmmmmmm….”

Crack! Crack! Grrrrrkkhhhh! Grrrrrkkhhhh!

(There were no more shadows. In the boredom room, on its white wall, clean, it’s stained by the blood spots.)

Silence…

“Ohmm…”

***

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Posted by Creating Class 2005 | Posted on Friday, November 28, 2008 | Posted in ,

I was motionless but I could feel my body was fallen down the asphalt. Felt down into the darkness and the frozen silence. In eternity. I thought I knew what this darkness felt like and the frozen silence tasted like. It was like an end of mine.

I saw there was totally dark everywhere but I was certain that I always kept my eyes on along the Broadway. “Where is everybody? Is there any body here?” were the questions I asked myself repeatedly. Then I deemed it, I was all alone and there was soundless. I was listening but there was no sound.

Out of the blue, I thought I heard and saw something was moving in the dull.

Something frightening…

The wings of that monster started to spread out like a sail of a boat. It looked like a dragon with the wings. Its eyes flared up violently like a flash light and I felt an earthquake when it walked its foot near to me.

It was getting near.

The flame was drawn out from its big mouth and its sharp teeth blinded my eyes with its glare. I was so scared; I didn’t even dare to stare it, I hid my eyes with the both of my hands. I did nothing when its wings crashed into the power cable. The crash brought about the magnificent fireworks from the electric cable. The cable was severed and struck down the cars around it.
The eyes of the monster looked intently at me. An enormous fear made me scream but no voices out. And I couldn’t do something. I felt pain in my breast, crawling into my arms and moving on my legs. It put together a throbbing heart of mine.

And my heart…

I guessed my heart would blow up in a second, my eyes jumped out, and my brain got out of my opened mouth that was screaming when I opened my eyes and saw the features of the dragon changing into my father’s countenance.

He’s getting nearer then I could smell an alcohol from his mouth. And he’s staring at me in an angry face and ready to confront me.

Well I knew it would be the end of my life. But wait! I didn’t realize that I held a knife in my hand, why wouldn’t I use it?

All of a sudden, the frost covered my whole body when I tried to plunge the knife into his eyes.

But I touched my body was frozen like a slab of ice.

In a few moments later, the frozen ice of mine disappeared. I awakened by a warm wave flowing through over my body. The darkness had already changed into the sunlight that came through the window’s gap, when you opened it.

“Sam, c’mon, gets up! The school bell won’t wait!” said you.

“I hate school, Mom.” I murmured.

“But you have to, honey,” your voice calmed me down. You was sitting in the bed side now and starting to lay drawn my blanket.

“Is it hurt Mom?” asked I.

“No, just get up and take a bath now!”

I knew it was hurt you. I knew how terrible he broke your heart into pieces. Why won’t you set yourself free from him? If I could do something for you it would be an honour for me.
“Sam, have you finished your bath!?” you yelled at me while I was washing my entire bad dream on my head.

“In a minute Mom!”

As soon as I got out of the bathroom with a strange spotless mind, you’re still at my bedroom, standing with a disappointed and depressed glance into mine.

Damn! I forgot that thing, the one now you held in your hand.

“Will you tell me what it is for?” You started say angrily.

You must find it under my pillow—the thing I used to kill the monster of my dream.

“Your husband should have been died this morning Mom.” I straight to answered you, I tried hardly to be that calm.

I had the nerve to saw your face; it had become a deathly pale.
“Sam, what are you talking about? He is your father.” You threw the knife and shaking my body hardly.

“No, he’s not!” I shouted you at the face.

“Look at you Mom! You are so miserable. Are you just fine in the situation like this? There you are. You are not anymore the woman I used to know!” added I showing you a mirror so that you could see how awful you were. Then there were tears finally bathing your cheek and you left me alone in a silence.

***

The sun that was shining brightly in June that made me felt a warm breeze in my shoulders. It was very contrast with the gloomy heart I had. It made me feel so hard to forget the bad thing came about me last night. Those hours of darkness all the hatred of mine being a huge mountain, I was losing control. Because of him all of the pain of mine started.

The thing happened again on the next day, I was just about a minute arriving at home, wishing to show you the paper of my biology and English which had a very good score from school. Bella and Tom were sitting outside looked so sad.

“What happened? Where is Mom?” I asked them.

Bella—Tom’s twin sister—ran to me and crying in my embrace. “He’s drunk anymore. He slapped Mom and rammed Mom’s head against the wall twice and it’s currently bleeding. Sam, I’m so scared.”

“He also broke my pig and took away all of my money!” witnessed Tom.

I heard the crash, boom and bang inside home, I knew you were fighting anymore. But when I came inside, he passed me through with the hand full of money, I was sure that were Tom’s.

It made me stood as a mannequin does nothing to do but watching the tears of yours. I squeezed the paper of my good score that now became a ball of paper and I threw it all away. I walked inside my bedroom and locked the door.

There I sat, next the window watching the bustard leaving home and probably back in the middle of the night or probably not.

There I closed my eyes and started to think why there was too much pain and sorrow occurred to this family. It was all because of him. But what if…

I wished he died.

The empty feeling was dancing in my head…

I tried to open my eyes, felt that the anguish of mine no longer in control. For all the things he had done to me, to you, Bella, and Tommy now he had to die.

In the middle of that night I got up and soon my foot led me to the kitchen looking for a knife that surely had been hid somewhere by you. I would use it to kill him when everybody was drowning in their dream.

It would be easy to kill him when he was drunk and slept in the couch. There was no knife I found. Maybe you had vanished all of it before something happened to him.

A desire to kill him was being an ambition of mine. If I didn’t kill him quickly, you and all my sisters would feel more pain in your life and I couldn’t let it in.

I sat at the chair on the kitchen, I was worried if couldn’t find that knife. I felt a burning hatred on my head. A whispering voice of the devil insisted me to do that but it was soon broken by a sound of a crying. A crying of a woman was heard vaguely. I was sure that there were you who cried in the middle of a silence.

What had he done to you? I was convinced there was something bad happened to you. I moved towards you at your room. But…

I was shocked with the thing that I saw.

There on the floor sat you with the hands full of blood and the knife in front of you. The death corpse of my father was lying next to you with a red fluid flow from it. The monster of my nightmare was gone and there would be no more flame drawn out from its big mouth that spread out the wretched of my life.

“I kill him, Sam. I’m a murderer. Forgive me…” you said with the tears bathed your cheeks. Suddenly I felt weak. I didn’t know what to do. I just stood there like a stone.
I built up all the nerve into mine and took the knife on the floor. I dragged myself into the telephone in the corner of the room.

“I’ve killed my father…” said I in the end of the call.

***
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